To and fro
Here and there.
You and me,
An unlikely pair.
Borrowing moments
Or minutes or days.
Focused blindly
We live in a haze.
Are we mere mortals
Ready to share?
To expose our hearts
By becoming a pair?
Copyright ©2008 Veronica Romm
August 10, 2008
You and I?
Posted by veronicaromm under blog, love, poetry, relationships, thoughts, web blog, writing | Tags: blog, literature, love, original, poetry, relationships arts, writing |[9] Comments
July 27, 2008 at 8:33 pm
Nice.
July 27, 2008 at 9:28 pm
Wow….how do you turn such simple words into things that make my stomach flip over????
You’re magic
July 27, 2008 at 9:56 pm
You captured this in such a few words, lightly and with elegance.
July 28, 2008 at 8:14 pm
Scary, Isn’t it?
But if one never gambles one never wins…
July 29, 2008 at 4:25 am
well done!!!
August 11, 2008 at 6:34 pm
Another Homerun, V!
I’m especially impressed with how you capture a nice tone without it ever sounding forced or insincere.
Keep it up!
cap
August 11, 2008 at 6:44 pm
some like it short
- and i do
thank you
August 12, 2008 at 6:56 pm
That says it all. But then, only by exposing our vulnerabilities and trusting can we fully attain the joy of two who are as one.
August 14, 2008 at 1:33 am
Are we mere mortals
Ready to share?
To expose our hearts
By becoming a pair?
We are not just mortals. Love never ends. Infinite.Beyond body.Just like our soul.. However it goes.. it never loses its glory..but if it ends in union that will be happy ending.